I can picture the five or so people Id like to sit around a small table at a towns salty bar and read Andrew Zawackis 30-page Georgia with, from Petals of Zero Petals of One. Bring the soft-voiced loud-breather. The thumb-rubber-by-the-knees. The carpet-bomber even. Each to read a page and pass it, praising ourselves in our diverse and appropriate reading styles, listening with open mouths at the right times or with wiping the beer circles off the table while nodding at the right times. Maybe theres a poetry bully in the corner with his loud knowledge of something forgotten.
True, this is no tomato juice and beer poem. This is locomotion. I think it is good to set poems of such downhill leaning to the tracks of everywhere.
So when the quiet person beside me reads and I find my responsiveness waning, I know to snap to and get ready to really read.
If poets invent duty for themselves, fine; but at least let’s soar at our inventions. I hope to gather this actual (similar) scenario sometime soon. I hope to read first because I want to read these page-one lines: snow is not like the snow Georgia/ one is theorem the other will thaw. But here, have more:
I dont sleep Georgia
I shoot bullets into the dark
the blunt mimeographic dark
the middle dark Georgia
outside the outside
whatever a ghosts front tooth is Georgia
let alone ballistics
whatever pulls back the hammer Georgia
coughing up sulfur and strobes of negate
I wait Georgia
the fire is like the snow Georgia
the snow wipes out a oneway street puts nothing in its place
snow is not like the snow Georgia
one is theorem the other will thaw
night is the neighbor girl
she hangs her laundry
she sits on the step
the leaves on the tree in her yard are like florins
her sliding door dress in a squall Georgia
her flowers what is a flower Georgia
When I read the poem on flight one from Hartford to Cincinnati I was proud to let Georgia let itself be. Every answer to How much attention should I pay to? is always a product of the same conjure. I tend to assume (err?) that repetitions are generative for the writer, optional for the reader.
Im now at a layover for three hours and I am meditating on placeThe Spirit of Pigcinnatiof course.
Its not the South here. Its early fall. The book is in my bag, and Ive misplaced the Georgia of the poem already. Nothing makes me feel thats good or bad. In long poems with a repetitious stitch, we chose our degree of permissibility early. Hasnt the first page already spurred you to decide what Georgia will have to be in order for you to? Me, I am not so worried about Georgia, so long as it keeps giving me that sweet end of line sip of itself, and it does. I am more interested in the accumulating, the sliding the eyes around any three lines at a time, not the accumulation.
Im wondering toward something else now, as I sometimes wondered toward something else during Georgia. The keeping up feeling in reading long poems is a measure of momentum much more than meaning. In fact, isn’t it only ‘keeping up’ if you are first trying for something that’s not in the text? We read with hyper-acuity when we are conscious of any acuity at all; is it necessary? These are the long poem issues I suspect more reflection toward.
I wish I werent eating Sbarro. Ah, that’s why I wish for salty bar: layover wishes, leading to wishing all the wishes.
Facebook list: 10 minutes, 10 favorite long poems: Go!
Song of Myself
Oppens Of Being Numerous
Hart Cranes Voyages
The Sermon chapter IX in Moby Dick ??? Melville
Sky Scrapers ??? Geraldine Monk
Red-Haired Boy ??? Merrill Gilfillan
Fool — Zach Savich
Kenneth Kochs The Circus (Thank You and Other Poems) and The Circus (The Art of Love) (I know I know. I can do better with Koch.)
Jack Spicer ??? Christ, anything really
Please define favorite long poems.
Why sure. I suppose I mean the poems youd line up for the first ten months of a Long Poem of the Month club you are about to launch at the salty bar in town. I guess its got to be long enough for you to imagine reading it in turns with five other people while trying to prevent any of that fracas about length defining most groups would love to belabor. I think Fool is the shortest on this list.
The good poet Ben Estes is launching a pressThe Song Caveof long poem books: excitement for his project is entirely why I am writing this.
Ok. Got to run. I cant wait to spend my next six hours in the air with the regret that I volunteered a top ten list. I will also seethe other book I brought being his selected poemsif I mean Gilfillans poem Solstice more than Red-Haired Boy.